A letter of the Sri
Aurobindo Ashram Trust has recently been published in the All India Magazine of Sri Aurobindo Society in the issue of
November 2012, strongly criticising the republication of the first edition of Savitri by Helios Books. Not only the letter is written in extremely bad
taste, but totally irrelevant and misleading comparisons and statistics regarding
the various editions of Savitri have
been quoted in it to impress the lay reader without actually touching upon the
central issue.
What is the central
issue? The editors of the Sri Aurobindo Ashram Archives with the full support
of the Ashram Trustees have been accused of tampering
the original works of Sri Aurobindo. This has caused great distress among
not only devotees but intellectuals and scholars who have written lengthy
letters to the Ashram Trust pointing out the editorial deficiencies in the editing
of Sri Aurobindo’s works, especially the 1993 edition of Savitri. (Jugal Kishore Mukherji’s
letter to Amal Kiran on the subject runs to 50 pages, single-spaced and closely
typed.) This has led to filing of numerous court cases against the Ashram Trust
by exasperated disciples causing a tremendous waste of energy and financial
resources to the Ashram. All this could have been easily avoided by a little
transparency and open-mindedness in the public domain by making the manuscripts available to
one and all instead of sitting on them and firing salvos from the safety of the
Archives Cold Storage. A public discussion could have at least released the
pent-up pressure if not improved upon the last edition of Savitri and other works of Sri Aurobindo. But no! The Ashram Trustees
think that there are no other scholars in the whole wide world except the four
editors who finalised the 1993 edition of Savitri.
Even in this exercise, Jugal Kishore Mukherji (former in-charge of the Higher
Course of the Ashram School) was sidelined and not allowed to study the
original manuscripts of Savitri. Dr. R.Y.
Deshpande’s request for the same was also time and again turned down. What does
this suggest? That there are things to hide and that the decisions of the
editors could easily be challenged and even proved wrong. This is the central issue
and the context of the Savitri controversy
which has dogged the Ashram Trust for more than a decade now! This is the core
issue that has not been addressed in the above mentioned letter which has been
dutifully published by the Society purely out of extraneous considerations and
threat! If the advertisement of the first edition of Savitri was released against payment from Helios Books, then the
views and statement of the Ashram Trustees ought to have been released as an
advertisement as well and against payment! However, the spineless Chairman of
Sri Aurobindo Society and the equally inept and incompetent Management
Committee of SAS chose to prostrate themselves in front of the Ashram Trustees,
not out of genuine academic consideration but out of fear of losing petty privileges
granted to them by the Ashram Trustees!
Why should
therefore the Ashram Trustees write such an uncouth letter and force the
servile and intellectually incompetent Chairman of the Sri Aurobindo Society to publish it in a magazine dedicated to the
spreading of Sri Aurobindo’s works? The Chairman also lets the Ashram Trust
backstab Helios Books after being paid
for the advertisement in the magazine. This is simply not fair! If he
really did not believe in the first edition of Savitri, he should not have allowed the advertisement in the first
place! But why allow such nasty and spiteful objections after the advertisement
has been printed? Or did he yield to this demeaning act because the members of
the Society will be deprived of food in the Ashram Dining Room or cinema in the
Ashram Playground? I would not be surprised at all if these were the actual mundane
considerations which made him allow such a vicious attack! And to think that, in
the early days of the Ashram, the first disciples left everything (wife,
children, property, name and fame, position and power) for the sake of the
spirit! Times have surely changed!
Now that the
central issue has been amply discussed, let us take up some of the irrelevant
issues raised by the letter written by the Ashram Trustees. First of all, why do
the Ashram Trustees snub Helios Books
on using the term “priceless edition” to describe the first edition of Savitri? Don’t they equally value the
first edition or do they only value the 1993 allegedly tampered edition? If the
implication is that the Archives editors perfected Sri Aurobindo’s poetry in
the 1993 edition, then so be it – self-deception and vanity are in plenty
everywhere, both outside and inside the Ashram! That is precisely why Helios Books has published the first
edition of Savitri fulfilling a
long-standing public demand.
There
have been 4 earlier editions of Savitri: the 1950-51 edition, the 1954 edition,
the 1970 edition also known as SABCL edition, and the 1993 edition. It would be
pertinent to note that 99.75 % of the text in all the editions has remained the
same. (Letter of Ashram
Trustees)
What is the pertinence
of the above statement? Does it mean that making new editions does not make any
difference to the reader because 99.75 % of the text has remained the same? If
so, why “impertinently” produce a “revised version”? And why object to the
first edition at all?
There
are numerous instances where the text of the “republication” of the “priceless
original edition of Savitri (1950-51)” differs from all the existing editions
of Savitri, including the text of the 1950-51 edition. (Letter of Ashram Trustees)
Only obvious
typographical errors have been corrected in the republished first edition. If
this is termed objectionable, then why object to the objections made to the
priceless “revised edition” which nobody wants to now buy or read? As for the
overall confusion created by the differences between the four editions, the
only way out is to go back to the first edition and restart on a sounder basis
instead of composing a priceless “revised version” for the creative
satisfaction of the editors. I would advise the conceited editors to write
their own poetry instead of tweaking the poetry of the Master!
The
so-called “republication” of Savitri contains some text which differs from the
1950-51 edition, but is in agreement with all the three subsequent editions of Savitri,
although the advertisement specifically induces the reader to believe that the
text is entirely in agreement with the 1950-51 edition. (Letter of Ashram Trustees)
Which publisher
will be foolish enough to mention insignificant editorial details of his book
in an advertisement? The editorial note inside the republication of the first
edition clearly mentions the correction of “obvious typographical errors”. By
the way, the pages have been renumbered to make one series in a single volume,
which does not tally with the page numbers of the two volumes of the first
edition. I suppose even this unavoidable difference deserves serious
reprobation from the editors of the “revised version”!
There
are other instances in which the text in the “republication” agrees only with
the 1993 edition of Savitri, and not with that of any other edition prior to
the 1993 edition. (Letter of Ashram
Trustees)
The editors of the
1993 edition should be therefore immensely pleased because in some instances
the republication of the first edition agrees with the 1993 edition. But what
about the other instances where they don’t match?
Finally, it is not
the number of verbal changes that matters as much as the importance of these
verbal changes from the point of view of substance and meaning. If “last” can
be made “lust” without batting an eyelid by the Archives editors and the Ashram
Trustees, the result is of course Peter Heehs! Who can
trust him or his editorial team after his infamous Lives of Sri Aurobindo? In
retrospect, all that they have laid their hands upon becomes suspect! The only
way then to move forward is to make all the original manuscripts of Savitri available in the public domain and
let the reader decide for himself!
Thus,
the “republication” of the “original edition” of Savitri advertised on page 40
of the August 2012 issue of AIM fails to measure up to its advertised claim. (Letter of Ashram Trustees)
Helios Books only claimed that the book has been “beautifully
produced as a limited collector’s edition in hardbound cover”! If anybody
denies the beautiful getup of this edition, he should be sent to Timbuktu or to
the coal mines of Jharkhand! As for the “priceless original edition of 1950-51”, it only shows the
respect and veneration that Helios Books
has for Sri Aurobindo unlike the Archives team of editors who have always tried
to pick out faults in Sri Aurobindo’s works and have even succeeded in finding
faults where there are none. Even his Yoga, philosophy and personal character have
not been spared by them!
It
really does not matter if someone buys this expensive book as long as the
purchase is based on an informed choice and not induced by any misleading
advertisement. (Letter of Ashram
Trustees)
Good paper and
printing is expensive nowadays. Publishers
have to make both ends meet even if they don’t want to make profits unlike the
highly subsidised editions of the Ashram Trust which floats irresponsibly on
the donations of thousands of devotees and disciples of Sri Aurobindo and the
Mother. If these devotees knew the way things function in Sri Aurobindo Ashram
and Sri Aurobindo Society, they would be shocked and stop all further
donations. In any case, a copy of the first edition of Savitri published by Helios
Books costs only Rs 1200/=, which is not much by prevalent standards,
considering the hardbound cover, the aesthetic getup and quality of the paper
and printing.
Finally, who is
misleading whom? The judgment should be left to the reader cum potential buyer
of Savitri with one prime
consideration in mind. Which edition would he or she prefer – the one published
or finalised during Sri Aurobindo’s lifetime or the 1993 edition which was finalised
after 20 years of scholarly or unscholarly arguments and poring through endless
number of drafts and versions of a symbolic epic poem which goes above the
heads of most people, including the editors themselves? If the reader chooses
the 1993 edition disregarding the controversy surrounding it, the edition is
readily available in the bookshops of the Ashram Trust. But what if he decides
to read the first edition and cannot find it anywhere? It is in fulfilling this
demand of a growing section of conscious readers that Helios Books has truly played a commendable role by making the
first edition available once again after 60 years.
The reader should
also be informed that the copyright of Savitri
has expired and the Ashram Trust no longer controls its publication. If the
beautiful edition brought out by Helios
Books has so much ruffled the feathers of the Archives editors and the Ashram
Trustees, it only shows how desperate they are to re-establish their lost
credentials. It is high time they realise that they cannot monopolise Sri
Aurobindo as if he is their personal property and concede the ground to other
publishers who can play valuable roles in the publication of his works.
Comment by an Ashramite:
ReplyDeleteHas the Chairman of the Society lost his senses? It seems so. May I please know when did the last change in the members of the Managing Committee and its Chairman occur? Are they enjoying some eternal divine right to hold such official positions?
Anonymous Response:
ReplyDeleteAll those who seem to be hardly fit to do divine work seem to be enjoying "divine rights", especially in holding official positions which give them power. This applies to both the Ashram Trustees and the Board members of the Sri Aurobindo Society.
What is wrong with Sri Aurobindo Society? Is it also going the Sri Aurobindo Ashram way? When will the Office Bearers of Society be changed? They should step down immediately for supporting the denigration of Sri Aurobindo.
ReplyDeleteThe Chairman of the SAS has proved once again that he cannot be trusted. He conveniently hunts with the hounds and runs with the hares. When it suits him he pretends to sympathises with all of us whose feelings have been hurt by PH and MDG. Although his announcement against the book was wishy washy, at least there was hope that deep down he shared our concerns. But then when the tide turns he also turns around and stabs us in the back. Such shamelessness will always the SAS trouble.
ReplyDeleteSir,
ReplyDeleteThank you for putting my comment. But I am now thinking that Sri Aurobindo Society is worse than Sri Aurobindo Ashram. The Ashram has stuck to its denigrating, stupid stand (it will realise the mistake one day perhaps), but the Society seems to be playing a double game. Senior members of Society are singing different tunes. How is this possible? Are they changing their colours like chameleons and going whichever way the wind blows? Just because Ashram has managed to fool the general public and important people, should Sri Aurobindo Society abandon the path of truth and deviate from the true goal?
Comment by Ritwik Banerjee:
ReplyDeleteDear Chairman,
(of Sri Aurobindo Society, Puducherry)
Please refer to your letter in AIM – November 2012 on the subject. We have still the memory of the Society’s lukewarm rebuttal of Peter Heehs’ biography of Sri Aurobindo. Now as we see on the Internet one Mr. Sridharan’s rejoinder to your tacit support to the 1993 edition of Savitri in the backdrop of the so-called “misleading” advertisement of the first edition of Savitri in AIM, would you not like to have an honest relook on the whole issue? Nothing will be better for you than to go on the Internet and other modes of public information at your disposal to let all Aurobindonians and the whole world know the truth of the matter.
To begin with, the word “republication” cannot be deemed as a misnomer simply because Helios Books have corrected some “typographical errors” in the first edition of Savitri – the errors cannot be attributed to Sri Aurobindo. That cannot be called editing since nobody except Sri Aurobindo can edit Savitri, strictly speaking. As he is not there physically with us now, one has to see whether Helios Books or any other publishers have done it rightly or not by going back to Sri Aurobindo’s final draft of Savitri. One needs to be sure if he really wrote the word “last” or “lust” in it, as Sridharan points out, and so on and so forth.
Secondly, if “99.75% of the text in all the editions has remained the same”, we still have the onus of making it impeccably 100% pure. The 0.25% variance works out to be something like 60 lines in Savitri which can be anything near 500 words! What should we do, then, truly speaking?
Assuming that the Chairman (of SAS) & Managing Trustee (of SAA) are honestly taking care of the “priceless” heritage of the Mother and the Master, one would simply expect them to exemplify their whole-hearted dedication and harmonious co-ordination in this kind of endeavour by subduing all kinds of hostile intentions, internal and external, by transparent means since there is nothing confidential in such matters. The documents have to be made public for the sake of truth. But, sadly, just the opposite is being enacted on the real stage of life in an Ashram consecrated to the ideals of the Master and the Mother.
Sincerely,
Ritwik Banerjee
Comment by Ritwik Bannerji:
ReplyDeleteTo,
Mr. K.C.Anand,
Editor, AIM, Pducherry.
Dear Mr. Anand,
Editing a magazine whose aim is perfection taught by Sri Aurobindo and the Mother, you are helping everybody. Hope you have forwarded my earlier email to the Chairman which needs to be addressed urgently and which remains still unattended by him. You may kindly apprise us with your own opinions in the matter.
Sincerely,
R.B.
Comment by Ritwik Bannerji:
ReplyDeleteI am not getting any picture of this whole business from any authorised people connected with Yoga. Yet my overall view is in favour of the "priceless original edition of Savitri (1950-51)" "republished" by Helios Books. They have tried to restore some typographical errors only in their republication debut and shown no audacity to edit a work of supreme significance by Sri Aurobindo, which has been done by Sri Aurobindo Ashram Trust. Adherents of Integral Yoga would love only the original works of the Master and not the edited ones posthumously done by others (even if they be with "99.75%" similarities) with their scholarly arrogance that has messed up things in a business of falsehood. There is enough room to appreciate the efforts of Helios Books in this direction. Maybe some more typographical errors need rectifications. That's all.
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ReplyDeleteThis statement in the post calls for some elucidation. Let me first say that “last” has not been changed to “lust” in the Revised Edition of Savitri brought out in 1993, [page 719]. There was the proposal in the Archives & Research periodical, Vol. 10, December 1986, that the Centenary Reading “last” should be corrected to “lust” [p. 234], considering that “last” would not make any sense; but finally this was not done. The Supplement to the Revised Edition of Savitri issued in 1994 does not have this entry at all in its Table of Emendations. We have therefore throughout, in all the printed editions of Savitri from 1951 to 1993, “last”. In other words, “last” was not tampered with in the Revised Edition.
However, we have to understand why the A&R December 1986 suggested “lust” in place of the original “last”. This was discussed in the Savitri-monitoring committee, possibly in 1988, when the original MS was also brought for checking. The Archives argument was, the “a” of “last” in the MS could be taken as “u” and as “last” does not make any sense—according to A&R—we could have the “corrected reading as “lust”. In the committee this was strongly opposed and Amal was good enough to see the point. The final decision was to retain “last”. I was personally witness to this.
I don't know why the statement within the brackets has not appeared at the beginning of the comment. The reference is to the following:
DeleteIf “last” can be made “lust” without batting an eyelid by the Archives editors and the Ashram Trustees, the result is of course Peter Heehs!
In the context of the general discussion regarding the First Edition of Savitri, let me also inform the readers its publication by Savitri Foundation. The Publishers give the following description about it.
ReplyDeleteSavitri First Edition
The first edition of Savitri came out nearly during the lifetime of Sri Aurobindo himself. Part One was published in September 1950 just before his withdrawal in December of that year, and Part Two and Part Three together within months of this date.
This original edition, the First Edition, was subsequently reissued on three major occasions carrying a number of revisions and departures, in 1954 (University Edition), 1972 (Centenary Edition), and 1993 (Revised Edition). It is said that this was done after thoroughly checking the texts against the various drafts of the composition. But in the process a number of subjective elements have also entered into these.
In the absence of complete details about the editorial selections including emendations a doubt about the validity of changes lingers in the minds of conscientious readers and scholars of Savitri. Besides, there is too much of intellectualization in the preparation of the Revised Edition which distances itself considerably from the pristine First Edition which actually bears the stamp of the presence of the Author. It is that which is more precious than any other scholastic editorial work.
Keeping in view this sanctity and significance Savitri Foundation has now brought out the First Edition in a convenient format as a single volume. The size of the book is user-friendly and easy to handle. The light golden colour of the text is much more pleasant to the eye and the mind than the usual dark black. The well formatted text with proper spacing makes the reading smooth and convenient. Its unique feature is the virtual line-break after each sentence which gives some kind of visual pause for the reader before moving on to the next one. We would like to emphasize that this is a definite aid for him to get into the spirit of the text, even as the thought links and thought structures stand out in a distinct manner. But, more importantly, it has the power to make the reader move in the rhythm of the poem itself, the swings of inspiration, something which is psychologically-spiritually valuable.
Comment by Ritwik Banerji:
ReplyDeleteMr. Sridharan is requested to provide for our information all his references of how and where a word “last” is/was changed into “lust”.
Chairman of Sri Aurobindo Society has considered Helios Books’ “republication” of the original Savitri as a new (fifth?) edition after the 1993 edition published by the Sri Aurobindo Ashram Publication Department, Puducherry-605002. Unwittingly he has given also his support to the Ashram trustees, maybe somewhat under duress. But that is not my point here. Unless a hypocrite, he owes an honest answer, without playing with words, to the Aurobindonian world on the whole issue of Savitri via-a-vis the advertisement AIM – August 2012 and his letter in AIM – November 2012 in the context of Savtri.
Truly speaking, Savitri has to appear in a yet new print to be 100% real as Sri Aurobindo’s Savitri, unedited and untampered. Who has now the honesty to undertake this task? No doubt a taxi-driver in USA who later was made chief editor of Sri Aurobindo’s entire Works in the Ashram and who came to be publicised as a historian and scholar of sorts, did play his game in it, but that is all over for good now. One has to turn now to nothing but the last final original MSS of Sri Aurobindo. A meticulous proof-reading thus from those MSS becomes an imperative now. Helios Books deserve all the praise for initiating this great task in a right spirit and can be assisted whole-heartedly. Ashram trustees better give their rigid dog-in-the-manger policy to cure themselves of a syndrome of severe psychosis mixed with hypocrisy. Their callousness only demonstrates the how and why of a situation that made India suffer all along in the course of her history and culture despite a brilliant heritage of enlightenment and sound knowledge.
Hence the need is urgent and pressing for restoring all remaining typographical errors (of words, phrases and punctuations) in the 1950-51 edition of Savitri. A few instances may be noted in this context e.g.,
1) Words “response” and “content,” in lines 3 and 4 at page 29 (in 1950-51 edition) may be corrected as “response,” and “content” respectively.
2) The phrase “hide and seek” in line 29 at page 61 should not be hyphenated like “hide-and-seek” in the 1993 edition. It is Sri Aurobindo’s own choice for the sake of metre in his poetry.
3) Words “monumental, lone” in line 7 at page 288 are to be corrected as “monumental, lone,” by comparison with original MS.
4) Words “the souls close” in line 37 at page 103 and “sun-light eyed,” in line 24 at page 142 (in Part II of 1950-51 edition) similarly should be compared and corrected as the case may be.
This is what we suggest in the present situation.
Comment by "Ritwik Bannerji:
ReplyDeleteIt is sheer audacity to revise the Master's spiritual poetry. I feel all joy in these lines of Savitri:
Heaven's touch fulfils but cancels not our earth:
Our bodies need each other in the same last;
(SABCL, Vol. 29, p. 719)
They vibrate so beautifully in substance and the peak of integral purity ( with "same" as noun and "last" as an adverb). Fortunately they are retained in Savitri.. Poor guys like PH/RH only can think of putting their "lust" into them. God save us.
(R.B.)